Bed of Roses

Bed of Roses

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

If life was a bed of roses, then

My neighbour would fit the bill,

He’d built him a twelve room mansion

Next to me, on top of the hill,

It made my cottage look down at heel

Til I grew a hawthorn hedge,

So nobody could look down on me

Though he did, from up on a ledge.

 

His name was Jeremy Harmon, and

His wife was Amanda Cale,

I’d played with him in the schoolyard, though

He’d won him a place at Yale,

He’d spent his life in America

Though he’d come back home to wed,

And stole the only woman I loved

From our own pre-bridal bed.

 

She’d fallen hard for his Ivy League

And his Yves St. Laurent suits,

His rented Aston Martin, and

His R.M. Williams boots.

He’d made a pile and he flaunted it

Before heading back to the States,

Taking Amanda Cale with him,

I got her note too late.

 

‘I’m sorry John, and I know it’s wrong

But he swept me off my feet,

We’re going to live in Chicago, where

He said that life’s a treat.

We’ll live in a condominium

And he promised me a maid,

Oh don’t be sad, for I’m rather glad,

Just think of the love we made.’

 

And that was the last I heard of them

For almost twenty years,

The name of Jeremy Harmon passed

My lips, as a sort of curse,

I just got on with my life, but brought

No woman to my bed,

My head was full of Amanda Cale

And her betrayal, instead.

 

They turned up totally unexpected,

Rang my front doorbell,

‘We’re going to be your neighbour, Hey!

It’s good to see you, pal.’

He seemed to be totally unaware

Of the grief he’d caused, back when,

I held my tongue and I kept my peace,

‘Okay, I’ll see you then.’

 

A year went by and the house went up

And I grew my hawthorn hedge,

Amanda worked in the garden planting

Seeds and lawn and sedge,

I did my best to avoid her, though

She tried to keep things light,

But chuckled things like, ‘Remember when…’

And I’d say, ‘That’s not right!’

 

‘You made your bed when you left with him,

There are no memories,

I saw you last in his Aston Martin

Waving through the trees.’

‘That was a mistake, I know,’ she said,

‘But things could turn out right,

He goes away on his business trips

And I’m all alone at night.’

 

I’m sure I said that it wasn’t on,

I’m sure I told her to go,

But she was given to plots and schemes

About things I didn’t know.

She asked me once for a bag of lime

To use on her roses bed,

And like a fool, I gave her the tool

To let her back in my bed.

 

Jeremy went on a business trip

And didn’t come home at all,

She said he’d gone to America,

Their marriage had gone to the wall.

She came to cry on my shoulder then

Each day, for almost a year,

And in the end, I had given in,

She seemed in a deep despair.

 

Her garden then was magnificent

For her roses were in bloom,

‘I’ve never seen such a great display,’

I said, one afternoon.

‘You can thank my husband, Jeremy,

He’s been working, all this time,

You’re tied to me for eternity

For you supplied the lime!’

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2014 David Lewis Paget


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Women know the magic and if the men can't reason enough(which seems to be always a case) can go anyway they want. I admire the satirical overtones of the poem. You are a story teller of a your own kind and that makes your works difficult to forget once I go through them.

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A very pathetic story poem, full of imagery and figurative devices. Well written, sir.

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Dee
A brilliant story/poem again Dave, wonderful rhyme and flow and the clearest of imagery.. gave me quite a few chuckle in the reading and the ending is a blast..Bravo..just love your work..Smiles...Dee.

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'You can thank my husband Jeremy.' I got that. -:)

Beccy.

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a great tale like all the rest. your poetry is something to savour in small doses, I think. like a cup of tea that you try to make it last. your last stanzas are always something to look forward to.
you know how to make your surprise under wraps till the very last.
women, women!

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Women know the magic and if the men can't reason enough(which seems to be always a case) can go anyway they want. I admire the satirical overtones of the poem. You are a story teller of a your own kind and that makes your works difficult to forget once I go through them.

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'You're tide to me forf eternity for you supplied the lime.'

Which only goes to prove that nothing survives without being properly nurtured and fed.

A grand tale that I enjoyed immensely.

Beccy.

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good one dave .I dont think you need worry about his feelings as he felt none for you

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LOL I love it! You have a true gift for weaving these sort of tales in rhyme. I never grow weary of reading your poems over and over again.

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I had one rose, and it died. I'm very jealous of Amanda; she has everything, ncludng a rose bed.

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Another great story David

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Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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