Dunkirk

A hatred of war does not necessarily make you a coward.

They came from a line of fishermen,

Way back, two hundred years,

The sons of a dour old Kentish man,

Who'd braved the First World War;

When Joe went off to the Army, then,

The old man's face was grim,

'You go and fight for the country, lad,

We can't rely on him!'

 

He scowled on down at the eldest lad

Who sat there, mending nets,

For all he knew was the salt, the sea

And a life of cheap regrets.

The black sheep of the family

Was all that his father saw,

For Jack had refused the Army call:

'I don't believe in war!'

 

A feather came in the post next day,

As white as a cotton sheet,

The father turned his back on him

For shame, and refused to speak.

While Joe went off with the B.E.F.

To help the beleaguered French,

Jack was mending his fishing nets,

And sat with his fingers clenched.

 

Their fishing boat, the Pelican,

Lay stranded in Sandwich Bay,

Just twenty feet, and clinker built,

With the deckhouse cut away.

When the Panzers swept down to the coast,

Reaching the channel first,

The B.E.F. had retreated back

To the beaches at Dunkirk.

 

The Navy sent destroyers then,

Their frigates and corvettes,

But couldn't get close to the beaches there

Because of the shallow depths,

The Navy's own small vessel pool

Then called for the help of those

Whose boats were a certain shallow draught

To ferry the soldiers home.

 

When Jack came in, the news was out,

His mother sat, dismayed,

The Army was stranded along the beach

Where Joe lay low, and prayed.

The Stuka's screamed, and dropped their bombs

And the lines of men were strafed,

Three hundred thousand men despaired

As the Panzers lay in wait.

 

'So much for you,' the father said,

As the tears poured down his cheek,

'So much for the lunacy of war,'

Said Jack, when he could speak.

'Your brother's out there, risking all,

My son, my shining light!'

But Jack stalked out with a bitter laugh,

And cried, when out of sight.

 

He strode on out to the Pelican,

The tide was coming in,

He dragged and pushed it to meet the sea

As he floated it again,

He kicked the inboard into life

And he sailed for Ramsgate then,

The boats were gathering by the score

To save their countrymen.

 

They sailed that night in convoys, groups,

And lines of little boats,

While Jack prayed long at the tiller

That the Pelican stayed afloat,

She'd never been out as far as this,

She was just a coastal craft…

But Joe stood out in the water, then,

And thought of his brother, Jack.

 

The Stuka's bombed the Naval ships,

They strafed the lines of men,

Joe didn't know if he'd ever get back

To his homeland, once again.

The Foudroyant was bombed and sank,

A destroyer ran aground,

Then a hundred boats, with the Pelican,

Finally sighted land.

 

Jack took the Pelican close inshore

And he loaded his twenty men,

He ferried them out to a waiting ship

Then turned to the shore again,

He plucked the men from the waters there

And he looked for his brother Joe,

But Joe was safe on a steamer, then,

Though his brother didn't know.

 

For hours he turned, and turned about,

He saved five hundred lives,

He worked himself to exhaustion there

Like a man who the devil drives,

Eight hundred ships and boats were there

In the smoke and the swirling murk,

To bring those thousands of soldiers home

From the beaches of Dunkirk.

 

Joe walked unsteadily through the door

To the cries of his folks, alone,

They couldn't speak for the pure relief

Of seeing him safe at home,

But his father suddenly pulled away,

And wept, while turning his back,

'We've just been told by the foot patrol…

We've lost your brother, Jack!'

 

'They said the Pelican's hull was holed

With a burst of cannon rounds,

The men on board were saved, I heard,

But three of them were drowned.

They left the bodies to float out there;

Oh God; now, what have I done?'

He shook his head as he cried, and said,

'I've lost my eldest son!'

 

They placed a plaque on the Harbour wall

For Jack and the Pelican,

While the father stared most days to sea

As he cried there, off and on,

Then he took a match and some tinder wood

For a pledge he'd made before,

To burn a pure white feather there

For a son who hated war.

 

David Lewis Paget

Reviews

[David Scott]

The lesson is refined by the delivery within your art form.
The reader knows what will happen intuitively, yet the unfolding of the story is spooned out on perfect proportions to stir the appetite while feeding the mind.
A great story!
Would there were more white feathers in this world.

[Valentine]

I love the way you are able to grasp my attention throughout your whole piece and never quite know just what to expect in the end verses..You have outdone yourself again David..What is the white feather and what does it mean??God bless..Valentine

[HoorayForUnderdog]

Magnificent!

[Becca]

Extraordinary! Congratulations are in order.
The tale took me to another time, another era.

[James Takeo Panton]

Thi is an excellent poem and tory, as well as an homage to those that have fallen....your usual excellence!

[Steve Thompson]

very detailed write, a story with rhyme and rhythm. Liked it alot, your concept and thought process.

[Norma J. Jessee]

David you are a superb storyteller. You get into our hearts and minds and captivate us with characters the way few authors can. I, like Damian have tears in my eyes.Your superb writing brought this story to life.

[Damian Alan Gray]

This is unbelievably good, David, and certainly the first poem I've read in a long while that has actually brought tears to my eyes. You never missed a beat in the rhythm, the rhyming was superb and the story was excellent. Nice work, my friend!

[Wildfleour]

David - this is an outstanding accomplishment. Although it has an old-fashioned flavor, it speaks to what is going on in our world today. Sad, but true. How many young people will have to lose their lives?

[Legion]

Splendid, but sad, story. Well crafted and well told. As always, your stories are a great read. The folly of war is the shame of man. Kudos! Going in favorites.