Small Town Business

Small Town Business

A Poem by Dawn Davis
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..Well if you are from a small town you will understand my next poem. Cross Canadian Ragweed came out with this song called Leave me alone. It fits how i feel at this time i suppose.

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Small Town Business


 

 


 

Everyone's storey they seem to tell


 

They dont know you? They make one up


 

See small town i know you too well


 

 


 

If they like you a good storey it will be


 

If they dont your fucked


 

you wait, you'll see!


 

 


 

Taking the trueth turning them to lies


 

Spreading them all over town


 

buzzing like flies.


 

 


 

Anything to bring you down


 

thats what they like best


 

See small town put me to the test!


 

 


 

I have a storey it is my own


 

dont make one up for me thanks


 

just leave me alone!

© 2009 Dawn Davis


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Isn't this the truth! This is well said and well put together.
This is wonderful, Boy this could be be stated as
this place here about certain people.
I will never understand why people can't grow up and
leave things alone and just stay out of other peoples
business. This is wonderful and so truthful.
Awesome Write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very nice poem! Most people lead little lives and find everyone elses life more interesting so that is Small (little) Town Life. Hit The nail right on the head!!!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Boy you nailed that right on the head. I never could stand small town Drama. I am so glad i am not living in that hell hole anymore.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahhh yes the whole Payton place effect... some people have nothing better to do but talk bout others lives, usually cause they have no life or a miserable one... even if the news is true it should not be discussed, like you said if they want they will lie to hurt you, that usually means they are jealous of you... great poem my friend.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah that is the total truth of a small town. I really think everyone that is from one knows just how it goes. There are a few spelling errors that take away from the greatness of this piece, i think correcting them will add so much more to this great writing...

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Isn't this the truth! This is well said and well put together.
This is wonderful, Boy this could be be stated as
this place here about certain people.
I will never understand why people can't grow up and
leave things alone and just stay out of other peoples
business. This is wonderful and so truthful.
Awesome Write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Growing up in a small town I can really relate to this poem, sad that people don't have anything better to do than to stick there nose in somebody elses business. Well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 14, 2009

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Dawn Davis
Dawn Davis

Cordell, OK



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Hello!!! My name is Dawn Marie and I'm from Cordell, Oklahoma. I will be 34 on New Years Eve., I have the most wonderful 15 year old daughter that is the light of my life my reason for living. I hav.. more..

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