Say goodbye

Say goodbye

A Poem by Dandelion

I want to say it's over
but it will never end.
My heart will drag along
closer than a friend.

You will push me away
farther than your arms could reach
and I will continue to suffer
until I've come to a breach.

You'll push me and push me
until I break,
Use me, tear me down
more than I could take.

© 2013 Dandelion

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Favorite line was, "My heart will drag along closer than a friend." It's good stuff, but to me, the last stanza was a bit weak in comparison to the beginning. Thank you for your work and keep writing...

Posted 10 Years Ago

between this and " i need a break"---

the speaker is pushed to the brink....almost forced to leave just for her salvation...

"you will push me away farther than your arms could reach"

lots said in that line.

a confessional style..and you do it very make us feel the pain, suffocation, the need to get some space.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Another very powerful poem my dear. You really do have a wonderful poetic mind.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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3 Reviews
Added on March 4, 2013
Last Updated on March 4, 2013



Pensacola, FL

I have a pretty amazing boyfriend. I also have a beautiful son more..

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A Poem by Dandelion