For The Rest Of Our Lives

Your eyes never look at me any more

your lips never beg for my kisses

your arms never reach out to hold me

your heart never feels mine any more.

His eyes burn with desire

his lips offer passionate pleasure

his arms hold me tenderly

his heart beats in time with mine.

I don't know where you went

I don't understand what happened

I thought we were meant to be together

for the rest of our lives.

He is here for me

giving me the love and affection

that you refuse to give me

for the rest of our lives.

Author's Note

This is personal and in my own style. Please be kind.

Reviews

[Christina May Shanaberg]

Been there, done that! People, sometimes, turn into someone we would have never fallen in love with. Do you stay with them because of a commitment to someone other than whom they have become or do you move onto happiness. Life is short, don't let anyone or anything keep you from one moment of happiness. Great write!!

[Garry E. Lewis]

I sad tale of love gone cold, expressing what used to be, but now is just a faded memory. So a new found love now unfolds, forbidden love yet love no less. Which is better then no love at all. One hates to see a relationship come to an end. It's never easy, and the pain of what once was now withering away. The only cure for a broken heart, is new found love to mend the heart. I loved your writing entitled: For The Rest of Our Lives. For all of us that yern for an everlasting love.

[Joe Shetina]

Love your style.

[WindSong]

A very beautiful poem about the pain and joy of love. The imagery within is very profound. Your presentation is excellent as always!

[Chris]

No need of kindness...
a very, very heart-full write.
Valid and real content.

Chris

[grayhaven]

Very nice write. It also holds special meaning for me also. You did a really good job on this. Your own style works very well. =)

[knightcall]

Just cleaning up

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A fine write, that relates, and makes one think why, these feelings happen!!

[Inyourshadow]

Oh sis this is beautifully done in a bitter romantic way, the sense of ones foolish ignorance leading you to the arms of another. You always find the words to pen the hearts needs and wants, keep em' coming

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

If you are not appreciated it is best to move on cause someone will. Never settle for less.