Waking Me

Waking Me

A Poem by Daytonight
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A sensual love poem.

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You wake me with a morning kiss
rousing my senses with sweet bliss
calling me your sunshine
making me feel so subline.

Aroma of coffee reaches me
opening my eyes so I can see
what awaits me on this day
seeing you my love, hoping you'll stay.

Let this morning reach such heights
as you bring me pure delight
your essence stronger than caffiene
your touch leaves me feeling so serene.

This is how I wish every day would be
when you are right here with me
teasing me awake with such sweet bliss
by waking me with a loving kiss.

© 2011 Daytonight


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Ok so a good laugh at me and my dirty mind, I read the title as Wanking Me and thought this was a masturbation poem :) serious then I read the poem and thought that it didn't fit but then I re-read the title and laughed out loud at work causing my security guard to look at me weird. I liked the write and understood it better after that!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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WOW!!!! This was sooooo beautiful!!! I could feel the sweet love and tenderness in every line here!!! Laced with romance and sensuality; and with such a great flow and rhyme!!! Just awesome!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love this. Ha ha, definately enjoyed it. =) Sensual, full of love, and sweetness..
I love it so!! Beautiful work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Remarkably penned, but then again everything you write is so marvelous. I wonder how you find your muse, but then I stay silent and just read and appreciate your words. ^^*

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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So beuatiful and sensual, I enjoyed this write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ok so a good laugh at me and my dirty mind, I read the title as Wanking Me and thought this was a masturbation poem :) serious then I read the poem and thought that it didn't fit but then I re-read the title and laughed out loud at work causing my security guard to look at me weird. I liked the write and understood it better after that!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and serene. I enjoyed this...xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Daytonight
Daytonight

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I am a hopeless romantic who still believes in happily ever after. I have a passion for writing poetry. My poetry tends to be tender sensual love poetry with some heartbreak along the way. I also l.. more..

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