My Other Half

My Other Half

A Poem by Daytonight
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A love poem.

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No matter how far we are
somewhere underneath this star
beats the heart of my soul mate
who makes my heart palpitate.

Nothing can truly keep us apart
as we are connected at the heart
and with your every single beat
mine answers back to meet.

No matter where we may be
we are drawn together by destiny
as you are my other half it's true
completeing me and me, you.

© 2011 Daytonight


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This poem has a good rhyming scheme and it's rhythm is easy to follow. I particularly loved the line:
and with your every single beat
mine answers back to meet.

That line was clever. Nice work. I can't wait to read more from you.


Posted 8 Years Ago


AWWWWWWWW.....wow... i adore this write!! It makes me yearn for that kind of love... i don't even know if it exists... lol. But who knows..
this kind of love is what's worth fighting for in life.. to be treasured and to give love and passion for that beloved... gosh.. such a dream hehee...
I love this poem! Great work dear!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


How beautiful as nothing so makes one complete as their soul mate. Love the gentleness, keep em' coming

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Kim
Beuatiful heartfelt write, I like this alot!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on December 22, 2011
Last Updated on December 22, 2011
Tags: Love, Romance, My own style

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Daytonight
Daytonight

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I am a hopeless romantic who still believes in happily ever after. I have a passion for writing poetry. My poetry tends to be tender sensual love poetry with some heartbreak along the way. I also l.. more..

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