Inner Happiness

6 word poem

Big grin

Eyes twinkle

Happiness within

Reviews

[OT]

simple but you get your point across!! well written - it's hard to get much meaning into such a few lines but you've done it very well here!! and the 10 syllables complimented the little rhyme well!!

[Cherrie Palmer]

I love to use broken images to create a picture, this is just wonderful

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

That made me feel happy just reading, love it!

[Tate Morgan]

I cant imagine it was easy to rhyme this piece in so few words But a child sees through virgin eyes what we walk right by

[Gone]

And so shines an infectious smile. May it become an epidemic!

[underwriter]

simple, elegant and about someone extremely awesome! i like this one alot! it describes her perfectly!!!!