Angel of Seduction

Poem about someone I recently met that I find so beautiful

Angel of Seduction

 

 

A beauteous angel,
Of such perfect imperfection,
Tragically bequeathed,
With wings of seduction,
Luminescent life,
A blossom among thorns,
The world uttered chaos,
At mere sight of her form,
Venomous whispers,
Addiction in her stare,
That brought my soul kneeling,
A sin no man could bear,
Such intoxicating rhythm,
Of dispassionate spell,
A colorless heaven,
Or a beautiful hell

Author's Note

This is copyrighted by walter scott morrison

Reviews

[Ebb and Flow]

Truly amazing! This is beautiful and alluring, and a tad bit forbidding. It's like she's everything and nothing someone has wanted all at once. Someone too good to be true, and someone who could ruin you. I love the rhyming and the flow this is wonderfully written.

Krystina

[Jennifer Pennington]

Wow this is amazing, you are a fantastic writer. Your poems ooze emotion. They are so raw and so real I feel like I am in each scene you write about. You definitely paint a wonderful picture man.

[Omar Fendri]

oh man, this poem is one of the most beautiful writings I've ever read.
"A colorless heaven, or a beautiful hell" Damn, this sentences makes me ponder a lot. I cherish it...
every line has its own charm.
I sincerely adore this one... well-done :)

[Paige Manning]

There are absolutly no words that could describe the underlining of this beautiful and raw arrangment of words. You truly have a gift.

[anonymously anisha]

OH MY GOODNESS I LOVE THIS!!
so oxymoronic
this is wonderful

[Rc R. Vagilidad]

loves the last two lines. it reiterated the fact the angel's compromise to weak-hearted man.
KUDOS mate...

[Broken Girl]

Very nice! I like it a lot! ... WICKED BEAUTY...

[Liza]

wow; just one lock in a look triggers this in a man
so many projections
onto a beautiful woman
its good to know
how that works
within a male's brain

[.]

perfection :) Your oxymorons are well phrased and this is a beautiful, touching poem..a solid piece of writing..first two and last two lines my favourite

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the duality is balanced in perfect poetic poise~the flawless rhyme sequencing enhances the emotive motion of being caught by such a lovely~much enjoyed your write!~