Greatest work

Greatest work

A Poem by Deadaisycat
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Another poem. I enjoy making them.

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Today is the day,
I do in fact say,
That I will advance,
Go far, say hooray.

Shall I see you there?
To watch me and stare,
At the grandiose work,
Which I shall prepare.

I promise it's good,
As well as it should,
It's my creation,
Knock knock on the wood.

It's my greatest work,
I'll say with a smirk,
Now come, gather round,
and see the artwork.

Do you enjoy it?
What?! It isn't s**t!
It's my best work!
It should be a hit!

I guess I have failed.
My skills were just veiled.
Behind my new luck.
Confidence derailed.

I will do better.
I'm a go-getter.
I'll practice real hard,
and find my answer.

Thank you for reading,
getting through this thing.
It must have been hard,
Thanks for listening.

© 2017 Deadaisycat


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Deadaisycat
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It has a nice sound, be careful in poems you rhyme, sometimes they sound forced. (Sometimes it cant be helped) If you notice your adding a stanza or extra line just to get that rhyme you are forcing. It would help to keep a pattern as well! But still its an amusing read! Very relatable which is also important! Keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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It has a nice sound, be careful in poems you rhyme, sometimes they sound forced. (Sometimes it cant be helped) If you notice your adding a stanza or extra line just to get that rhyme you are forcing. It would help to keep a pattern as well! But still its an amusing read! Very relatable which is also important! Keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Deadaisycat
Deadaisycat

Lawrence, IN



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My name is Daisy, I'm 17, I am probably mentally ill, bisexual and I enjoy writing short stories and poems, plip. I'm also a gaming lover, so... yeah. I also always take requests, so fire away plip... more..

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