Heartkey

I had a request from a friend of mine to make a sad love poem, so here it is, plip.

You emptied our home of all but me.

You turned your back on my heart..

Now darkness consumes all that I see,

As my will crumbles apart.

My eyes empty, out like a glass,

My soul, a wisp of burnt-out flame,

I rust, and I mold, waiting for all this to pass

For the hole in my heart is yours alone to claim.

I'll join you soon, perhaps in a year or two,

Save me a spot at the table if you still love me,

I wish that the rope hadn't stolen your breath from you,

Cause your cold corpse still holds my heart's key.

Author's Note

I'm not too strong with rhymes, but I suppose this made good practice.
As per usual, tear it apart as always.

Reviews

[Dreaded Reset]

love it! great job at putting the rhymes to part and sentence meow!