Pleasure

I am dedicating this to someone very special...I hope you know who you are.

Pleasure

Pleasures of the mind,

immediate harmony with the body,

 always pushing expectations and

cohering to imagination.

Prominent delights competing with

pleasant movements.

Swaying to the music of your soul,

living in your own symphony,

singing to your own melody.

Immediately inviting innovation and

anticipating sudden,

fulfilling

completion.

Reviews

[FIN]

This piece makes me happy. I thoroughly enjoy the pace it plays out within; ending perfectly. Well done.

[Deandra Dawn]

Thank you so much!

[ron]

Great poem about pleasure. Its not always the intimate pleasure's that we experience.

[Deandra Dawn]

Thank you again! :)

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[Paul Pruett]

Clear and concise. To the point! Excellent!

[ANM]

I think it hits the spot!

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Wow.. Nice writing. Keep writing. If possible then Do u read my writing Anguish?

[Shaquana Adams]

I love the music in this poem. Nice job :)

[MoriartyMesa]

Sounds like someone has a fancy that takes form in a perfect mirror of words and thought.

[Deandra Dawn]

Sounds like someone knows exactly who and what Im talking about...