Essence

Essence

Your solicitous sophistication
manifests an insensitive
absolution
an ultimately fruitless
endeavor
packaged with an uncontrollable
anger
towards truth
meaning..
the very essence of
what is
not what could be
or what has been

Author's Note

Again....still a work in progress

Reviews

[Forest Green]

A good beginning...! Not a poet by nature so I can't name the couplings or any of that, but this is a fine effort.

Another stanza or two..? Perhaps...your call.

Well done...!

[Distant horizons]

Sounds like an unwanted advance or someone who doesn't see the real you, but as wonderfully cryptic too as your words usually are :-)
Love it