Agony

Agony

A Poem by Deandra Dawn

AGONY



Agonizing wisdom
giving way to a naïve mind
descending knowledge
formed from twisted lies
truth seeks a willing target
the tongue scorned by the message
impermissible values
forcing a hand in deviant perspective

© 2012 Deandra Dawn


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Often the least said the better. Especially when thinking about agony. Truth certainly does seek a willing target and there are plenty of those to be had.

Your writing is very good, deeply meaningful with an air of mystery. Nothing agonising about that!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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The last line of this poem holds the most powerful meaning. It is amusing to see how deviants are deflected to a different path.
Well done xx

Posted 2 Years Ago


Aw yes a short poem ;) overall message clear and somehow you must be gifted because you managed to get both dots over the i!! (I so forget what they're called)

Posted 7 Years Ago


some poetry requires a shot of something for extra kick, not needed here. Well maybe a whiskey sour. but still I enjoyed it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was just about to write "Something are better left unknown," but then I looked at Cathy Wattam's review, and I think I'll just concur with her. The reviewees have said the things I wanted; so I'll leave you with this: With agony comes healing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wisdom can lead us into a good places. Lies can make any truth fade away to memory. I dislike liars and people who can tell the different between a lie or the truth. I like the closing lines. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


very good

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very understanding of agony within thoughts of precise feelings of someone has felt. Very Good

Posted 7 Years Ago


Loved everything about this..form, rhythm and intensity all in so few words..Well done

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong thoughts and deep emotional turmoil...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Often the least said the better. Especially when thinking about agony. Truth certainly does seek a willing target and there are plenty of those to be had.

Your writing is very good, deeply meaningful with an air of mystery. Nothing agonising about that!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Deandra Dawn
Deandra Dawn

Orlando, FL



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My name is Deandra Dawn and I have been writing for as long as I can remember. I also go by the name, Ravishing Raven, and I am currently reworking my website. What else is there to know when there .. more..

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