Love and Loss

Just something that i wrote just without thinking really

A tear drop,

A moment,

We live in Slow Motion.

The sun and the moon,

The land and the ocean,

You and me hold on to one crazy Notion.

A smile filled with sadness,

A memory out lasting,

Don't know if I will ever get past this.

A quick wave goodbye,

You fade out of light,

Will see you again when day becomes night.

Author's Note

thoughts, views, critiques, just emotion from me so let me know how you fill.

Reviews

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

This was so good!!! It honestly kind of reminded me of a song. Like I could totally picture it with music. Great job with this!

[DeanoSohno]

I think i did kind of write it with a song i had been listening to a lot recently. A drop in the ocean by ron pope. Thank you for such a good review :D

[❤ Maggie ❤]

Oh I love that song!! And you are most welcome. :)