Scarlet Drips From Your Heart Tonight

I am the monster in your head.

I control all feeling,

I control all pain.

 

I am the monster you see from the corner

of your eye.

I am everywhere but nowhere.

I haunt you from afar.

I haunt you in the shadows.

 

I am the face you see in the back of your

mind.

I am the striking pain,

I am the painful feeling.

 

I am the grim reaper that yearns

for your soul.

I am the icy cold hand on your skin.

 

I am the knife thats entering your heart.

I am the knife that stabs you,

again,

and again,

and again,

and again.

I am the scarlet that stains my

stainless steel.

Reviews

[Awkward]

This is so dark! I loved it! I absolutely love dark poems and this is one of my favorites! Thank you for sharing!

[GlamGirl]

Creeeeeepy!
"I am the knife that stabs you,
again,
and again,
and again,
and again."
*shivers* Great write!

[State of Grace]

Dark, chilling, and just plain epic! Great write!

[JustNeedToBeHappy]

Very simple but very very chilling :) Well done :)

[Darius]

o_o i like it. very eerie and creepy. also deep. flawless job as usual ;D

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

wow. Very chilling, made me have shivers. Amazingly good write.! :)

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This is an amazing poem. So many can reate to this poem.. great write

[Bryan Micheni]

I love this poem, especially the last stanza:) awesome write:)

[Dom]

Oh how I love dark poetry! This was a great write. Awesome job!

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

"I am the face you see in the back of your
mind.
I am the striking pain,
I am the painful feeling."

This stanza was great. I loved the darkness of this poem. It was very descriptive and I could relate to it well. Keep writing! :)