All My Negative Thoughts

All My Negative Thoughts

A Poem by DearSweetAgony

There is nothing left of me.

Cut me open so I can bleed.

Surrounded by your mindless

greed.

May my broken soul

rest in peace.

 

These are the thoughts of a corrupted mind.

These are the beats of a battered heart.

These are the fears of an over emotional soul.

Hold me over the edge and let me go.

 

As darkeness engulfs my startled

mind,

a tangled truth will now unwind.

Fearing what is make believe

Deny the fear thats choking me.

 

These are the thoughts of a corrupted mind.

These are the beats of a battered hearts.

These are the fears of an over emotional soul.

Hold me over the edge and let me go.

 

Pray to a god that isn't

listening.

Ingore a pain thats suffocating.

Wish a cure for the sickly stars,

shining a promise to damage hearts.

 

These are the thoughts of a corrupted mind.

These are the beats of a battered heart.

These are the fears of an over emotional soul.

Hold me over the edge and let me go.

 

 

© 2011 DearSweetAgony


Author's Note

DearSweetAgony
This is actually a song.(If you can imagine that)And feel free to say anything
you feel.

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Before I even read it the picture gave me an erie feeling!

As I read the Author's note I was thinking yes I could totally imagine this being a song
I would imagine an artist like Otep singing this!
Thank you for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


You're really amazing. I play guitar and i would love to have someone like you as my lyricist. I noticed we like a lot of the same bands too. This is really a great song. hopefully one day ill turn on the radio and there it'll be;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Would you mind If I put music to it?

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really like the rhyming flow of this poem/song. It has lots of emotion. Great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love it, its very deep. I could definitely imagine it as a song. In fact I recognised it as a song before reading your note :)
As usual with your writing...Brilliant :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like how deep it is :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow, This poem is absolutely amazing! The flow is beautiful and I can feel all the emotion you poured into this and I can completely relate.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love this!! You make it flow like a really depressing song...but it is one I would listen to lol. I really like this particular line "Hold me over the edge and let me go."



Posted 10 Years Ago


All these lines and verses you've written have so much emotion and sadness. Every line saw so much pain in it. Beautifully expressed. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on April 10, 2011
Last Updated on April 17, 2011
Tags: Sad, Emo, Depressing, All my negative thoughts, dearsweetagony


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