Orchestra: Insanity's Symphony

Orchestra: Insanity's Symphony

A Poem by DearSweetAgony

Discordant sounds of my rapid violin play
The mad songs for a demented listener.
Corrupt thoughts invade my sanity as the strings fray,
This bliss madness sets my heart on euphoria and lands on pure splendor.
Thoughts of bloody murder spill from my imagination
Conducting a bloody piece, with a slight chance of action; very slender
A true being of evil! yes, an abomination!
I can already hear the screams of the bleeder!
As the screeching of the violins grow, swifter and swifter
The wicked thoughts are becoming vivid-- so vibrant!
The cadence of my heart beats louder and crisper
And images of me dancing in my victims cartilage!
Oh!  how I loathe these horrid pictures,
Filling my brain with naughty thoughts
Oh! how I detest these forms of torture!
 As the violins begin a song filled with question and fraught.

© 2011 DearSweetAgony


Author's Note

DearSweetAgony
Sorry for the abrupt ending, I was going to make the transition more smoother. But I realized that I would prefer a rugged ending; such as the violins screech.
There will be a second one, but for now just be honest.

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I can picture the violinist's fingers bleeding to this!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oooo...this is amazing. I truely love the imagery that plays around my mind. =D You did a stunning job playing with words here. =)
Interesting message! Love this piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Lovely... Oh sweet insanity, why am I drawn to you so? Becoming 'evil' and 'an abomination' and hating yourself for it... I know that feel. But like I think you said before, the world is cruel and wicked, so why not be more wicked and more cruel?

Good stuff. I like your work so far.


Posted 9 Years Ago


I think the ending suits the poem perfectly!
Left me sitting tense actually! lol
Perfect!
xoxo

Posted 9 Years Ago


I didn't feel that the ending was too abrupt, i think it really helped tie it all together. Wonderfully done, great work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is good.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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