True Love

True Love

A Poem by PetiteGemini
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This describes how love should be.

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 Before I met you, my heart was weary,

    Making me a shadow of my true self. 

 You have made my life no longer dreary.

 Your love means more to me than any wealth.

 

 I can’t describe the love I feel for you.

  It can’t be put in a number of words.

 This love has to be a dream; it’s too true.

 This love surpasses a number of worlds.

 

 There isn’t anything like you on Earth.

 I can’t live without your smile and your love.

 You don’t understand how much you are worth.

Your love and mine soars like a pure white dove.

 

 No one’s love can compare to what ours brings.

 Soon, we both will be wearing wedding rings.

 

 

© 2011 PetiteGemini


Author's Note

PetiteGemini
This is how true love should be. Never take it for granted.

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Cute and a tad naive

Posted 12 Years Ago


Who knows love? Not I...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aww...yes this is beatifully written!! So true it is!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yup, I totally agree with you!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is beautiful... "love surpasses a number of worlds. There isn’t anything like you on Earth." I love it. Excellent work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


WHAT A FLIPPIN' CUTE ENDING!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Too true - again, a lovely job!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 25, 2011
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