Warm Steel

Warm Steel

A Poem by Hide From God
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Nights I want to forget

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My hand is shaking again
Even in the darkness it's quite clear
This feeling grows every second
But I can't help but find it weird
Because while it's so cold
It feels so warm in my hand
Like a part of me was lost
But now it is found

A million memories flood my brain
A thousand thoughts rush through
All this pain is too much
It's gently pressing against my temple
Like a soft kiss, it's comforting
Solace and peace will come soon
I can't live another day with this
As I close my eyes I know
That this is it, it's the end
My hand is trembling again

© 2010 Hide From God


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I love how the first and last line sorta mean the same thing :D
Ok, to tell the truth, I don't really get what your poem means xD What were you trying to get us (The readers) to feel? Maybe it's just me or something, but that's my thought.The reason I said that is because I'm a rather curious person and would like to know what this poem is about xD Or what is means to you o.O
But regardless of whether I understand this poem or not, I still had a good read :D The image was quite vivid in my mind ^^

Posted 13 Years Ago



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