Closer to Bliss

Closer to Bliss

A Poem by Hide From God
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About a girl

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This is kinda new to me
These things I feel
Somethings stirring deep inside
That haven't been seen for awhile
Almost like a warm sunrise
Or a warm camp fire

But I see it your eyes
These feelings are returned
What I feel for you
Are feelings that are understood
So please take your time
Because I'll give you all of mine

© 2010 Hide From God


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I'm quite pissed. My last review had way more to it thank what it shows. I'll just say much less this time. "But I see it your eyes" I think you meant "But I see it IN your eyes"? Is that right? Well sorry this website sucks and isn't letting me post my original review.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Bryan my good man! How art thou? This poem is good! I like it!

"But I see it your eyes"

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 19, 2010
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