Dust and Me

Dust and Me

A Poem by AcasualPawn
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I presented the relation between dust and me in a dramatic manner

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I wiped the shirt covered by dust,
With frustration and discomfort.
It was the filth beneath my shoe
Trying to trespass through.

Ignoring the thoughts
I walked it past,
But suddenly huge wind starts blowing,
Dust also starts flowing,
Taking the shape of sculpture
Like my shadow in the mirror.

Thunders reverberate in mind,
A scene flashed of my dying.
As dust's sculpture and me joined.

© 2017 AcasualPawn


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I love the conclusion! Great imagery!

Posted 6 Years Ago


AcasualPawn

6 Years Ago

Thanks elliot b. For accepting the request and giving it a glance. I hope you like it
nice idea and good work. keep writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


AcasualPawn

6 Years Ago

Thanks George for accepting the request and giving it a glance. I hope you like it
Yes, agreed, I was born in a Dessert, dust can only be descibed as a four letter C word, which I will not utter. Thank you for sending the Read request :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


AcasualPawn

6 Years Ago

Thanks ejheather for accepting the request and giving it a glance. I hope you like it
Yes, I think you presented the relation between dust and you very well. This is really quite a clever poem. Sometimes the dust just won't leave one alone. I love the clever 'vision' at the end, 'dust's sculpture and me intervened' (Just a thought, would intertwined be a better word?) Well written poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

That makes two of us then - you were entirely correct with astringent :)
AcasualPawn

6 Years Ago

Ya did you tried my other poems...
They are more dramatic..
Great Aunt Astri

6 Years Ago

I'll have a look too. {:
Dust and me, basically depicts the general truth in dramatic way that in the end we will become dust itself

Posted 6 Years Ago



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