Rusted World

A Poem by AcasualPawn

Dream of a blind kid comes true, but there is more to it.....

Darkness my phobia,
empty' isolated' dumb' rejected.
Sole possession of me,
my only buddy.

morning arises in darkness
night ceases in darkness..

My fantasy' dream' desire
to appraise & admire,
heavenly world entire.

May be god becomes kind,
with a letter i got donated eyes

But first thing i saw with my eyes,
are few words of advise.

THIS WORLD
IS SO CRUEL
AND I DON'T WANNA
SEE IT ANY MORE

© 2017 AcasualPawn

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miahstr

Maybe thats why he donated his eyes...

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Yes but,world differs according to opinions. Thankyou miahstr for passing by...

Tony Jordan

It would be a huge let down to see such after the longing to see. Great imagination PIG.

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Well the world differs according to opinions.. Its just piece of advice from donar of the eyes...

The silent girl

Wow.. Thrilled
Amazing writing.
"INSPIRED"

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Well my pleasure, to serve..

Black Rose

Omg I thought you were talking about the darkness that follow us around after facing the society or depression we have. But the ending was wow!

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Thankyou black rose for appreciation

6 Years Ago

My pleasure :)

lostinthewaves

It is good to have a realistic view of the world, but reality is still up to opinion. Good poem, thank you for sharing :)

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Yes you are right. Its up to personal opinion..... That's why he got only advice from doner of the e.. read more

Mr.Write

For some blindness is a curse but for others it became a blessing. Good poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Thanks mr white

Adam Light

Good story. I like it. I love exploring darkness.

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Me to thanks for passing by adam..

EJ's Horror

I feel your philosopical morbid picture of the world, and in truth behind all the beautiful flowers, mystic beasts and picture perfect landscapes, the world is a pree messed up place, keep writing my friend!