Maybe I am the problem

Maybe I am the problem

A Poem by Death's Poet

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Maybe I am the problem?
Do they have problems when I'm not here?
I don't know. 
I'm trying to keep it together.
Being the friend to protect others
But my weakness starts to show.
If they see my cracks they won't let me in
If I am so withered, my petals droop.
How on earth could I help others grow.
They want to help, they allegedly say.
But I can't comprehend someone loving me.
What a beautiful life for someone bound to go

© 2020 Death's Poet

Author's Note

Death's Poet
I was quite tired whole writing this so if you have a correction or Idea let me know! :)

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Added on August 1, 2020
Last Updated on August 1, 2020
Tags: sad, relationships


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