The Last of the Starmakers

The Last of the Starmakers

A Poem by Debby Pillitteri

Purple rain trickled on my window
Twas a mini action movie
In for my eyes.
Staring off in disbelief
At that tip-tap noise
But now my body shakes
As my jacket draws closer
With the zippers you play with
As we lay on the ground
Faces face-up
As we gaze on and out
At the empty sky around us
Lazily, surrounding us;
No more excitement,
No more enjoyment,
As the memories flood,
As you lean in and whisper,
"We are the last of the starmakers."

© 2014 Debby Pillitteri

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A well written poem...The ending was sooo good...:)...............

Posted 7 Years Ago

Debby Pillitteri

7 Years Ago

Thank you thank you thank you!!!
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................

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Added on January 25, 2014
Last Updated on January 25, 2014
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