Virus

Thoughts...

Merely thinking about your name

Makes my heart flutter

Merely spotting an identical back

Makes me wonder where you are

Every word you utter

Is what I dream of each night

Every glance we share

I tally in my mind

You’ve planted inside my chest

The indestructible disease

You’ve scattered in my heart

A virus of love.

Author's Note

Opinions, s'il te plaît...

Reviews

[snopadelic]

Wasn't what i was expecting. Although i think our right about love eing a virus espec when u end with the consenquences of it not working. I love that line indusrustable disease. I like this, to me its got a proper struture (not that i know what a proper sturture is) but it looks like a poem and reads like a poem. Very good

[Tom C]

Very nice. I like the not sureness of the poem is what was planted good or bad then in the end how you sum it up to love. Grreat. I like it.

[Amen_Poppies]

I enjoyed reading it... It was beautifully written... Great Decemberist!

[ब्र&#..]

amazing job!
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- Meja

[Miss Anna]

Oh I can relate to this, which is kind of awful and beautiful at the same time. But wonderful job expressing your feelings in a short piece like this.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Kind of a "back-handed" complement to my way of thinking. The persona is telling the belove'd that s/he loves him/her yet doing it in the least complementry way at least IMHO I personally would never tell my lady that her love for me is a virus because that word has a negitive connotation. The poem, though well written forms an unpleasent image in my mind like "O.k. so you love me, I guess I'll accept that--- or like an old song asks is that all there is to this? As if love insn't enough. Love to my mind is the eptomin of life it is all there is that can keep giving yet increase as it gives nuff said!