Invisible girl

Just that annoyance when you like someone and they don't feel the same way, or they don't see you in that kind of way.

 

I tell you that I like you.

 

That is very true

 

I tell you that I like you

 

Do you even have a clue?

 

 

The look on your face is so blank

 

You tell me 'I like you as a friend'

 

Seriously, am I that rank?

 

 

This crush has been going on for years

 

But I was really scared

 

All of the secret tears,

 

I don't know why I cared,

 

to even tell you my feelings.

 

 

 

Well now you know the truth.

 

 

But I'm the invisible girl

 

The one who is always there

 

My emotions are in a whirl

 

This isn't fair.

Author's Note

I just got this inspiration when I was reading speaknow's poem 'That boy from my dream' So the credit goes to her for the inspiration!
'Rank' is a slang term in the UK for bad.

Reviews

[Moflo]

Nicely written. I felt the emotion you were conveying and can really sympathize. Good job.

[Dreamer<3]

I really like this! I could actually see this extended into a song, or left like this. I love it, though!

[GreenSkeleton16]

awww ive been in that situation... A LOT but good expression!! i loved it!

[OT]

haha nice use of "rank"! Brit indeed! nice simple to the point poem! expressing the frustration when you get the courage - only to be knocked down! and a nice alternating rhyme scheme! fits the topic well - the ups and downs!

[Ashley Myers]

i find this poem amusing lol. the poem itself is not, however i had this experience with a crush. i told him how i felt and i got laughed at by both him and his friends. i was humiliated, but of course i still crushed on him : ) needless to say though, i saw him once since then and of course the only thing he remembers me for is the words i said to him. So sad. Im obviously over him but i can relate to your poem 100 %

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

This was nicely done. I'm sure a lot of people can understand the frustration when you finally get the nerve to approach someone and they give you that weak false smile and brush it off with politeness.