Suicide

Suicide

A Poem by DeepDarkPoetry
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it is about a lonely girl who, well just read plz, T cause i'm paranoid

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As my feet move closer to the sand I feel no sign of regret, no tears in my eyes, completely un-emotional. I am now in my icy grave, feeling nothing, as I walk further I start to remember what drove me to this madness, the hundreds of kids laughing at me, tears in my eyes, the water is up to my neck now, still time to get out of this nightmare no I shall stay and do the world a favor, up to my nose, can’t breathe air getting away from me this breath might just be my last, it was.

© 2009 DeepDarkPoetry


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Really good. I haven't really been a fan of poetry than isn't broken up into stanzas 'coz then it doesn't flow right for me. But this changes it all.. perfect flow.
Like the last line the most.
Keep writing

Posted 14 Years Ago



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DeepDarkPoetry
DeepDarkPoetry

Chicago, IL



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i write poetry and mybe sometimes a novel but i really, really, REALLY need opions plz more..

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