What do you do?

What do you do?

A Poem by Jennifer
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Something I thought of

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What do you do when the person who broke your heart is the only one who can fix it?
What do you do when love is your enemy?
What do you when the one you love turns away?
What do you when life catches up to you and break your heart?
What should I do, sit and cry over you or just forget?
</3 Please stop playing these game </3

© 2011 Jennifer


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I like the concept; I don't like the formatting. It just contrasts too much with the solemnity and hurt in the poem. Instead of the

Posted 9 Years Ago


it's a wonderful piece... anyway I definitely agree with jasmine nothing is impossible with TIME....it can heal all wounds...what you feel right now is just a temporary defeat.....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, powerful and intense. well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good Jen

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I HEAR YOU JEN .. TIME HEALS .. A YOUNG HEART BROKEN FINDS NEW LOVE .. GAMES SHOULD NOT BE A PART OF LOVE .. REMEMBER THE GOOD OF EACH ONE YOU MEET ..

TAKE CARE .. J.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was greatly written ,and i felt the same feelings before but when you think by your mind you'll get over everything ...
Greatly written :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Find him and show him you love him!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jen if he really loves you he'll come back for you, if not he doesn't deserve you. Have you ever heard the saying If you love something let it go, if it comes back its yours if it doesn't it was never yours in the first place.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i liked it and do what you feel is right... you can talk about it or just try to move on quietly... we have all been their or will be their so just know their are people that can help...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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