Idk

Love started so slowly,

You called me yours,

I called you mine,

You saw whats on the inside,

I saw your love

You said the words,

I loved the the line

So will you love me just for tonight,

When It hit daylight,

It started look like a fight,

Im bout ready to get my shoes,

Walk out the door,

You wont have a clue,

Where Im heading to,

Or where Im going,

Even if the wind starts blowing,

Or if it starts snowing,

I wont be coming back,

Or missing you,

But you don't have a clue.

Author's Note

I think it has potential for a song

Reviews

[Wandering Violet]

It's got a nice flow, and could be even longer. Some of the grammer needs a little tweaking, but I do like the theme.

[stars are far]

this was so nice
i loved this line :
"You said the words,
I loved the the line"..

[J. J. Nightingale]

Wow another "I LOVE YOU GOOD-BYE" .. TAKE YOUR TIME WHEN YOU WRITE .. WAIT TILL YOU HAVE COLLECTED ALL YOUR THOUGHTS .. AND RE-READ .. .. NEVER PUT YOURSELF IN HARMS WAY, BECAUSE OF SOMEONE ELSE ..

PEACE LITTLE ONE .. JAZZ

[emma]

Nice! And I think it could definetely be a song...

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i like it and it can be anything you want...