Idk

Idk

A Poem by Jennifer

Love started so slowly,
You called me yours,
I called you mine,
You saw whats on the inside,
I saw your love
You said the words,
I loved the the line
So will you love me just for tonight,
When It hit daylight,
It started look like a fight,
Im bout ready to get my shoes,
Walk out the door,
You wont have a clue,
Where Im heading to,
Or where Im going,
Even if the wind starts blowing,
Or if it starts snowing,
I wont be coming back,
Or missing you,
But you don't have a clue.

© 2011 Jennifer


Author's Note

Jennifer
I think it has potential for a song

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It's got a nice flow, and could be even longer. Some of the grammer needs a little tweaking, but I do like the theme.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this was so nice
i loved this line :
"You said the words,
I loved the the line"..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow another "I LOVE YOU GOOD-BYE" .. TAKE YOUR TIME WHEN YOU WRITE .. WAIT TILL YOU HAVE COLLECTED ALL YOUR THOUGHTS .. AND RE-READ .. .. NEVER PUT YOURSELF IN HARMS WAY, BECAUSE OF SOMEONE ELSE ..

PEACE LITTLE ONE .. JAZZ

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice! And I think it could definetely be a song...

Posted 9 Years Ago


i like it and it can be anything you want...

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Jennifer

In Hell tbh



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