"Lost in the Moment"

"Lost in the Moment"

A Poem by Delores Jordan

This poem is about a female orgasm

This poem was published in 2003 in The Sucarnochee Review Vol 13, 2003

Lost in the Moment




Delores Jordan


I look down my own body

My eyes lock into yours as

Your large pupils hypnotize me

They will me

 To submit my most secret of secrets

Then my gaze becomes unfocused

As I draw my conscious self

Deeper and deeper into my body

Down I drift as I literally feel myself disappear

I cease to be

I am muscle, skin, heartbeat, and nerve endings

I am fire and earth"the sun and the stars

I am gasping for breath and then I cease to breathe

I am poised for a second

In the land of immortality

I sprout wings and soar

Long gone from my own mortal body

I tremble, and then I scream

I don't even hear


I am the center of the universe

I am an atom that explodes

Fragmenting into a million particles

Magnetically swarming together

As I again perceive that"I  am me.

© 2012 Delores Jordan

Author's Note

Delores Jordan
If you are a woman, did I capture that moment?

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you caught the moment regardless of gender very sensual poem flowed very well describing emotions. enjoyed it

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Delores Jordan
Delores Jordan

Mobile, AL

I'm the author of many short stories and had my short stories, essays, art, photography, and poems printed in literary magazines and anthologies. I love to write. I'm a member of two critique groups:.. more..