A Poem by .Because.I.Said.So.

Pills that heal,
Pills to make you feel
Pills that have all sorts of uses,
Pills that help you make excuses

Pills of all different colors,
Pills to babies from their mothers
Pills you take for depression,
Pills that help you ease the tension

Pills all lined along the shelf
Pills she used

To kill herself

© 2013 .Because.I.Said.So.

Author's Note

I wrote this a while ago, and I know it's really bad, but it's for a contest! It's a bit sad, but it's something I felt needed to be said, even if it does suck >.<

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Ouch, I thought this one was going to be a lighthearted spoof on the evils of pills..it hardly sucks, it says a lot....killer ending, no pun intended, it really wrapped it up, sadly, nonetheless.

Posted 10 Years Ago


10 Years Ago

Thanks :) I'm not really a big fan of poetry, but apparently that's all I can seem to write. Thanks .. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Oh my bite your tongue, not a big fan, what else is there?! Haha....you're welcome. :-)

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Added on September 1, 2013
Last Updated on September 1, 2013
Tags: suicide, attempt, depression, pain, death, pills



Kanab, UT, UT

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