InSaNiTy

InSaNiTy

A Poem by .Because.I.Said.So.

That girl you see today,
all popular, loved, unfazed
Today she's fine
Not a cloud in her sky
But tomorrow she'll go insane
Her father's a drunk
Her brother's doing all sorts of junk
Her mother has left
Her family thinks she's a pest
Tomorrow she'll go insane
At school they see her
At school they believe her
She hides her bruises
Uses lame excuses
But tomorrow she'll go insane
Tomorrow you'll see her
Tomorrow they'll leave her
Broken, sad, alone
But all she wanted was a place to call home
Today, she went insane

© 2013 .Because.I.Said.So.


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This holds so true for so many girls.
And it really sad, that some people manage to have followers but no real friends.
And yes, family is the most integral part of one's life..and irony is..that family is the only subject we cant crib about to everyone..telling someone how one's family is screwed up is like giving away the biggest secret of one's life..
With all those feelings getting bottled up..like you say, tomorrow she'll go insane.
Sad yet true.

Beautifully written. :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wonderful job. Beautiful powerful message.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This holds so true for so many girls.
And it really sad, that some people manage to have followers but no real friends.
And yes, family is the most integral part of one's life..and irony is..that family is the only subject we cant crib about to everyone..telling someone how one's family is screwed up is like giving away the biggest secret of one's life..
With all those feelings getting bottled up..like you say, tomorrow she'll go insane.
Sad yet true.

Beautifully written. :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 9, 2012
Last Updated on September 1, 2013
Tags: abuse, poetry, depression, suicide, attempt, insane, insanity, pain

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.Because.I.Said.So.
.Because.I.Said.So.

Kanab, UT, UT



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Hi! I love writing. Poetry, books, stories, songs, most everything. I may not be good, but I love it, and FYI, I'm proud of my work, no matter what anyone says! I decided that if YOU don't like it, D.. more..

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