A Poem by Abd-afeez

a cautuoning

Smoke screen

I see a legion of men,
Amidst which chaos spread,
I see the redundancy they bred,
The evil they bled.
Illuminations with killing edges
Orchestrated in carnages with no end.
Ocean of blood ending in rivulets,
Met by seas of tears.
A dense atmosphere that read,
"Doom is in the air."

Men and their ignorance,
Where hide their insights?
Men playing gods on earth,
Ruling with a devil-right-hand.
Tell them to be careful,
Tell them their ends pend.
Tell them that which they never learned;
That there is no smokescreen in heaven.
The sovereign eyes watches,
And It shall judge with no mercy.

© 2014 Abd-afeez

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Very powerful. I love the last 3 lines.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Wow. I see where you're coming at. A better caption. Good bro

Posted 6 Years Ago

Wow. I see where you're coming at. A better capture. Good bro

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


6 Years Ago

thanks so much for coming by
The sovereign eyes watch and shall judge with no mercy. Men who play gods. This is a powerful write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


7 Years Ago

thanks for the review. it's very much appreciated

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Added on October 14, 2014
Last Updated on October 14, 2014
Tags: evil, good, heaven, earth



Ibadan, Nigeria

Am just so creative and prolific. Am from south western nigeria. And am currently studying biochemistry. i really love the science world. Here you see a piece of ink on paper and on it you see result .. more..