Smokescreen

Smokescreen

A Poem by Abd-afeez
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a cautuoning

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Smoke screen

I see a legion of men,
Amidst which chaos spread,
I see the redundancy they bred,
The evil they bled.
Illuminations with killing edges
Orchestrated in carnages with no end.
Ocean of blood ending in rivulets,
Met by seas of tears.
A dense atmosphere that read,
"Doom is in the air."

Men and their ignorance,
Where hide their insights?
Men playing gods on earth,
Ruling with a devil-right-hand.
Tell them to be careful,
Tell them their ends pend.
Tell them that which they never learned;
That there is no smokescreen in heaven.
The sovereign eyes watches,
And It shall judge with no mercy.

© 2014 Abd-afeez


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Very powerful. I love the last 3 lines.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow. I see where you're coming at. A better caption. Good bro


Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow. I see where you're coming at. A better capture. Good bro


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abd-afeez

6 Years Ago

thanks so much for coming by
The sovereign eyes watch and shall judge with no mercy. Men who play gods. This is a powerful write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Abd-afeez

7 Years Ago

thanks for the review. it's very much appreciated

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Added on October 14, 2014
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Abd-afeez
Abd-afeez

Ibadan, Nigeria



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Am just so creative and prolific. Am from south western nigeria. And am currently studying biochemistry. i really love the science world. Here you see a piece of ink on paper and on it you see result .. more..

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