How I Feel

okay this is to my boyfriend Jason.

You're the one i fear losing so much

i could lose you

i go through mood swings so much

i know i confuse you

it's the pain that keeps me

from communicating with you

but,

fear runs deep through my veins

i fear being hurt

to the point it drives me insane

i fear going through s**t

i don't want to again

it's almost to the point

i can't come to you as a friend

listen,

i need you

to teach me how to love right again

be my man

and at the same time

be my friend

be the bandaid to my heart

the icy hot to my soul

wrap your love around me

as if im cold

reassure me well be together

until we're old

to make me feel better

those things i need to be told

only if you mean it though.

Author's Note

IGNORE GRAMMAR PROBLEMS!! Okay now that that's out of the way. Just tell me what you thought over all about my poem. As Erykah Badu said, i'm an artist so i'm sensitive about my shit. lol. Don't insult, don't attack lol just tell me how you felt, that doesn't mean sugar coat it either.

Reviews

[bailish]

Well, I'm not often accused of sugar-coating too much, so here goes, bailish mumbled with a sly grin on his face.

Your passion sounds to the point of desperation. The thought of being without him consumes you so much that you're not even thinking about how he makes you feel.

Remember, when you love a flower, you might pick it and place it in your pocket, but that kind of love kills. It's only love if you allow the flower to blossom and live its life as it desires.

[Rev. Fr, S. D. Blankens..]

Hey, I really enjoyed reading this my favert part was when : fear runs deep through my veins

i fear being hurt

to the point it drives me insane

i fear going through s**t
And I found this worth the time too read. I reather enjoyed this. Thanks for posting.

~S. D. Blankenship the GOTHICCOWBOY