To You Who Pursue Me

To You Who Pursue Me

A Poem by A LaDy NaMeD D
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*ahem actually written for a person*

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It's funny how you try to make me sway

to the direction of your wind

I can say anything to you

still you don't understand when

 

I don't sway to your game

because i don't get down like that

you ask, why not be with me

simple..i'm happy where i'm at.

© 2008 A LaDy NaMeD D


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I really liked it. Short and to the point, with a lot of feeling. I can totally understand where you are coming from. And you were right about the poem No names...no attachments. It was inspired by one of my friends. She acts like she doesn't care about not being in love but inside I know she is really lonely. Very intuitive!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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this was short, cute, and very well written. the first 2 lines really set it up well. swaying to the direction of your wind, very clever. loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haha Too cool!
simple..i'm happy where i'm at. - PERFECT! haha

I love it!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked it. Short and to the point, with a lot of feeling. I can totally understand where you are coming from. And you were right about the poem No names...no attachments. It was inspired by one of my friends. She acts like she doesn't care about not being in love but inside I know she is really lonely. Very intuitive!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you're very smart. I'm going to print it and keep it in my wallet.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 20, 2008

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Smithfield, VA



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HI!!!! It's been a LONG time and a lot has changed. I think the only thing that hasn't changed is my want to be a published author. I typically write erotica, but i'm know to dibble and dabble in .. more..

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