Frayed Ties

Frayed Ties

A Poem by Desert Knave
"

where it all went wrong

"
There's no need for things
To be replayed
As I know well
Where it went wrong
The ties between us
Began to fray
When I used them
To string you along
Ties based on lies
Seldom stay strong


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2022

© 2024 Desert Knave


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Oh, what a poignant poem this is! Truth and honesty are paramount in a relationship, without them both, there cannot be a meaningful and healthy relationship. The final two lines of the poem: "Ties based on lies seldom stay strong" bring the whole poem together for me. Can never understand why a partner in love cannot be upfront! Anybody who 'strings another along' is using them for the user's own benefit. Best this relationship hit the rocks and sank the relationship in deepest waters never to be resurrected or given the kiss of life so it could be renewed again. I like the message within the poem which is evident once the poem is read, that is to never make use of another human being, never lie, never cover-up and never take your partner for granted or for a fool! Sorry, Jim. I got a bit carried away there! Well inked and expressed, the words are covered in a blanket of sadness! Great write... Thank you for sharing...

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Desert Knave

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much. As a young man I was not very in tune with anyone's feelings but my own ... and i.. read more
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Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Dear Jim, life doesn't come with a manual and we learn as we get older and thank God for that. Thank.. read more



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Oh, what a poignant poem this is! Truth and honesty are paramount in a relationship, without them both, there cannot be a meaningful and healthy relationship. The final two lines of the poem: "Ties based on lies seldom stay strong" bring the whole poem together for me. Can never understand why a partner in love cannot be upfront! Anybody who 'strings another along' is using them for the user's own benefit. Best this relationship hit the rocks and sank the relationship in deepest waters never to be resurrected or given the kiss of life so it could be renewed again. I like the message within the poem which is evident once the poem is read, that is to never make use of another human being, never lie, never cover-up and never take your partner for granted or for a fool! Sorry, Jim. I got a bit carried away there! Well inked and expressed, the words are covered in a blanket of sadness! Great write... Thank you for sharing...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much. As a young man I was not very in tune with anyone's feelings but my own ... and i.. read more
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Dear Jim, life doesn't come with a manual and we learn as we get older and thank God for that. Thank.. read more

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..

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