First Flight

First Flight

A Poem by Desert Dreamer
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Poetry inspired by the photo of a butterfly.

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© 2011 Desert Dreamer


Author's Note

Desert Dreamer
Background image by PoppySilver.

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I read about butterflies all the time, the subject of many poems.
Now I have read one that has done poetic justice to this marvel .
Not to put down others, just think warming wings in morning sun
made all the difference. Gold dust is too, magic,
Sending children into flight is always in mind- love your work,
Rossen

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Such a wonderful message in this delightful little poem... when ever we take a chance how can you not wonder how others will react or effect them.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem reads like a morning hour launch pad-- leaving the flight or the day up to the reader to create. Incredible impact!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry inspired by metamorphosis

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I remember this image. Poppy always had some that made you think.
I love your thoughts on this image.
You make the butterfly sound beautiful ( which it is)
and ready to take on the world.
I would love to witness the first flight of a butterfly.
Beautiful thoughts.

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply pretty. The words alone form an image and the photo just adds to the beautiful words. Very pretty.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

looks like a tortoise shell butterfly, do you get the swallowtails in your area ?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh how tasteful and so touching.. Your imagery was perfection!

Mags xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh, I want to witness the flight . . . lovely words and image

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 23, 2011
Last Updated on January 25, 2011
Tags: challenge, butterfly, photo

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Desert Dreamer
Desert Dreamer

Sonoran Desert, AZ



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