Poppy Folds

Poppy Folds

A Poem by Desert Dreamer

inner sunshine





Single gold Poppy

closing because of the clouds

where is the sunshine?









































© 2012 Desert Dreamer

Author's Note

Desert Dreamer
Photo taken last week, Spring is here!

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very lovely ...you capture the colors of the wilderness as well as you do the blooming glades...

Posted 5 Years Ago

Great description of the Poppy. Nature give us surprise gift for the wise in vision. Thank you for the photo and the poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago

ah, this is nice...a haiku that if read between the lines could be a senyru for someone whose life is dark and painful...that person hasn't felt the sun in so long.

and is tired of being single, but is afraid to open up again...the risk feels too high.

Posted 8 Years Ago

My favorite flower, love this one! Great photo too.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Indicates the necessity of sunshine for beauty of flower and thus for the whole living entity.
Amazing write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I like the words that go along with this photo

Posted 8 Years Ago

maidahl, yes, it is a flower and I see a whole universe in every flower. Flowers are amazing beings that teach lessons if we take a moment to listen. This specific golden poppy taught me an important concept about human beings and relationships. I give thanks to the flowers for sharing their wisdom.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I favor haikus because they don't strain the attention span. This one taxed me. The picture is distracting. As a poem, this is hard to get worked up over, you know? It's a flower.

Posted 8 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the poppy identity...

Posted 8 Years Ago

you live in blessedness, how nice

Posted 8 Years Ago

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30 Reviews
Shelved in 3 Libraries
Added on February 22, 2012
Last Updated on June 26, 2012
Tags: poppy, spring, flower, sunshine, relationship


Desert Dreamer
Desert Dreamer

Sonoran Desert, AZ

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