Raindrop Trails

Raindrop Trails

A Poem by Lorrie

Follow the trail
see where it leads
what magic awaits
for you and me.

 

A sharp bend
a downward slide
will it reach
to the other side.

 

Collecting many
along its way
on a never-ending
course it stays.

 

Oh look here it ends
to sit up on the edge
Did you see the magic
that it brought.

 

With designs upon the pane
no two ever the same
there you see
a new trail for you and me.

© 2009 Lorrie


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Very nicely done... simply romantic :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this poem, you really good at writing poems, it's something that I've never been able to do.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brevity is a good tool in poetry and you use it well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

see the funny thing is the trail can lead u to meny places but the thing is where do u want to end up is the question and with who love it lorrie keep up the gd work

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lorrie
Lorrie

Caraway, AR



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