Visions of You

Visions of You

A Poem by Lorrie

When I close my eyes
I see visions of you
in my dreams
A brief moment here
A glimpse of you there
Your undeniable scent
lingering everywhere
like a warm summer breeze
you pass on through
leaving me longing
for more visions of you.

© 2009 Lorrie


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Great rhythm. It really is a great read, and i think it puts readers in a dream like situation. I feel like the title may give away the message a little bit. I really enjoyed it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


the rhythm and flow in this is definitely on point

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i liked this alot. it sounded like that song "everywhere to me" by micheal blanch.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like this on u want more images but that persone is denieing u them

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lorrie
Lorrie

Caraway, AR



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I am happily married to a wonderful man. I am an avid lover of chihuahuas and share my home with one of them and a cat. I do not consider myself very good at writing but I try my best. I guess in lif.. more..

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