Never gonna quit

life isn't easy...... that what makes it great....

I turned my back because of my fears

You can see in my the tracks of my tears

Each droplet represent my despair and frustration

As I lower my shoulders to depression

 

Just ruffling my hair in confusion

and biting my lips because of regrets

Each chance I couldn’t get

Make me feel success is just an illusion

 

But no, I will never quit

Even if my hope is little bit

I must try hard and be brave

for not to be shaken by life’s harsh waves.

 

Author's Note

We're High, We're Right....Even if life is Rough, We don't Stop!!!




~Boyfriend~

Reviews

[Saumya]

this is really wonderful....!!!!
very well done...!!!

[Tomislav Petricevic]

An encouraging poem, very good job!

[Scytheriax]

Absolutely lovely font, first off.
I like the rhyme scheme you have. You stuck with it and it doesn't seem forced and there's no awkward half-rhymes.
But at times the flow of the poem is a little bit off.
One example is the last two lines of the first stanza. I feel like the third line in the stanza is just a drop too long for the poetry format.
But overall I liked this piece.
Very motivating.