A Poem by Desmund Tiny

I'm so in LOVE and sick with these feelings I have for you.


Now that you are not around

My heart feels a heavy pound

Boy I want you to know

I never wanted you to go


I wanna hold you tight

coz when you’re around, I feel alright

You’re the only one that i want

But now you are gone


Lone soul, now I am broken

As I watched you turn away

There so much to say, too many words unspoken

When you are gone away


Here I am all alone

Having this night on my own

Hoping you would come back to me

Without you, I’m so lovesick baby




And there’s nothing I can do

coz I’m so in love and sick with you



© 2013 Desmund Tiny

Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
I love him but I couldn't say it...couldn't confess to him... LOVESICK WITH HIM........ And it feels heavy damn it.

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I also know the hardship of not being able to confess to the one you love. Love is really just an double edged sword. Useful but one might end up being hurt. In the end, love is a burden that we humans must carry. It weight can be overwhelming (super heavy in your situation) but one can choose to let go of this weight or carry this burden in one's heart, forever (not being able to let go). I was cursed with the last choice but I broke free of my curse. I hope you have overcome your hardship, becoming more wise and having learned to not make the same mistakes again. I really like this poem, for it is sad and carries the truth that is shared by many.

Good job :D

Posted 5 Years Ago

Desmund Tiny

5 Years Ago

Actually I confessed to him..... and we're just friends~ I feel much better now and I'm glad that h.. read more

5 Years Ago

No problem and being friends is also great :)
It's hard being open when rejection is a real possibility... trust doesn't come without risking a price... and the saddest part is having to pay it anyway because you couldn't risk it.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on October 18, 2013
Last Updated on October 18, 2013
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Desmund Tiny
Desmund Tiny

I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..