A Poem by Desmund Tiny

"If time is a video, I want to press the rewind button and stop to that moment."


Thinking back of our great memories

As my clock keeps ticking backwards

To those days our affection and happiness

Until we started to fall apart


Forever wandering in time’s maze

Searching for our bond in haze

Go back to that dream like moment

To stay to our good times we spent


Reverse to that season of bloom

And forget the present’s doom

I wanna hold you back in my arms

Just like when you and I are warm


Turn back to that yesterday

Escape this painful truth and dismay

To see your smiles that stirs up my heart

And NEVER play that GOODBYE part.

© 2014 Desmund Tiny

Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
Inspired by the Japanese Movie "The girl who leapt thru time" TToTT the ending~

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It's nice to see you here again :)

Posted 5 Years Ago

Desmund Tiny

5 Years Ago

yah active ka pa pala freeeeeee!!!!!!!
I really like this poem. Time is an abstract concept of something that we humans cannot fully explain, for we like to invent concept for something that we view as the 'unknown'. There are many interpretations of time, so there are also thousands of reasons of why people want to alter time. For life would be so much better if we could, just play, resume or rewind at free will, because we are now forced to be played without any chance of rewinding or pausing life. This poem is awesome and the move: "The girl who leapt through time" is a wonderful and awesome movie, in my opinion. I only recommend to change the font, for it was hard to read but the core of your poem was clear. It shows that you lack no talent.

Good job :D

Posted 5 Years Ago

Hugot pa more hahahahaha sounds like a lyrical poem to me :))

Posted 6 Years Ago

Desmund Tiny

6 Years Ago

kase naman eh puro about time ang pinapanuod ko and listening to rewind .... Lyrical poem is my styl.. read more

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Added on November 23, 2014
Last Updated on November 23, 2014
Tags: time, love, rewind


Desmund Tiny
Desmund Tiny

I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..


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