We grew Apart

Not all friendships last

I remember how close we used to be.

Each moment we shared together,

pure and innocent memories.

It seemed like our friendship would last forever.

                                     

But one time, this bond came crashing down.

We started to grow apart.

This loneliness makes me feel to sink in the ground,

and it gives uneasiness to my heart.

 

I can no longer cry for this pain.

I need to stand on my own and face the challenges.

I don’t want to be insane,

because of these blames.

Author's Note

^^, sorry for the grammar problems.....

Reviews

[Rosey]

"I don't want to be insane,
because of these blames."

I'm feeling this. You wrote they words I could not say. Thank you! It's freeing to have them out in the open! Amazing poem!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very emotional and touching write, great rythm. Love it :)

[Jeremy Baker]

Very powerful and carrying a lot of strength within its words - well written.

[Jena]

Wow! I love the last stanza! Well written.

[sugar]

I thought it was good

[Thea]

It's okay...Don't worry, there are still a lot of people who are for you...Very emotional poem...Great penning... :)

[A Risen Heroine.]

I can relate to this poem oh so well...
It hurts to grow apart..
Well done.

~A Fallen Heroine~