Mr. Prince

don't compare yourself to their fantasies. Be proud of who you are.

He is such a gentle guy

That everyone wants.

In his one glance, it’s like they are going to die

He’s every girl dreams, A Perfect man

 

He doesn’t misbehave in front of everybody.

He’s intelligent and talented

He’s good at anything

Except for one thing, to express what he really wanted

 

Like everyone, he wants to be simple

But he is special in everyone’s eyes

He’s like a prince, nice gentle and humble

He lives his whole life in lies.

 

Other boys befriended you

because you’re popular with women.

Every girl comes to you

Because they think that you’re their ideal man.

 

To them, you’re a great fantasy

Nobody knows the real you

But you have limits too, we all have and that’s reality

Let others see and learn to love the real you.

 

 

Author's Note

sorry for the grammar problems...please just ignore it.... thanks for reading..... >.<

Reviews

[Malychyte]

Wow, yes. I liked NightShade's look on it. Very great work, very cool lesson to be learned. Thanks for writing it! haha

[NightShade]

Throughout the narration, the observations that you make are spot on, for so many people I have known... I like the fact that you are not judging. Only stating the facts, as you see them. Your advice at the end is priceless.

[SinnerInspired]

I wish there was a guy that was this nice

[Layla Anne Massaro]

i dunno whose poem is the same as the design where the first letters are bigger than the others. quite makes me curious. ok, good poem, once again. i ignored grammar problems as what u said. this is interesting and i can relate to some lines. you are welcome.

[joshua deathdealer]

This is awesome. I'm really impressed with the style and feel of this write. Excellent portrayal of this familiar scenario...xx third stanza...xx

[Dakota "Zero" Jones]

I like it. in some way I can relate to it.

[sugar]

loved it, perfectly written

[Jeremy Baker]

No-one is perfect in reality, but its fun to dream.

[Lily Mae]

Very nice.. we're nothing with out our dreams..xx

[stars are far]

i really loved this and the title is great also the subject is awesome...
great written :)