Guitarist

He lightens up my heart when I'm feeling down.... ^^,

Sitting there at the back of classroom

Reminiscing the past, feeling doomed

Suddenly he settled beside me

And I mentally counted one, two, three.

 

He strums the guitar strings

And started to sing

The guitar’s sound, in perfect harmony

With his voice that fills the air so softly

 

He sings a song that inspires

Like the angels singing with their harps and lyres.

To me, his music is fascinating

It’s so hard to breathe with my heart's furious thumping.

 

He lightens up my heart

By singing and playing his guitar.

With his unique music

I’m already captivated by its magic.

Author's Note

I dedicate this poem to my special friend..........Just ignore the grammar problems......

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Reviews

[NightShade]

The flow is smoothly melodious and has served to soothe the savage storms in my psyche. For that I must thank you! See? His music echoes across eternity as all sound sculptures of truth and beauty must!

I noticed that the beginning letters to each verse were large and viewed on their own, spell Shhh. Was that an intentional acknowledgment to how your tumultuous mindset was quieted by him and his music?

All around, a gorgeous bit of literary art!

[Thea]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA DO YOU REMEMBER DO YOU REMEMBER DO YOU REMEMBER THROWBACK PLS

[Desmund Tiny]

:)))) throwback??

[Kuhr Gred]

who's that special friend? great write :D

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Awesome, as usual! I like the expressions in this one, they just make the flow slide along greatly. This is real art!

[Regrets]

Awesome write.

[Jordan's Back]

A wonderful Dedication! Excellent write!

[iron_rose]

nice...

[FallenWingz]

lovely poem..

[K.C. Zbryk]

very well written, and the sincerity shines through. A wonderful tribute for your friend...

[Layla Anne Massaro]

good poem but i like rhyming poems more but dun care, this is pretty cool. i also love guitar. you can improve if you will try. >:)

[Jeremy Baker]

Poetic, simple and hearfelt.