Guitarist

Guitarist

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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He lightens up my heart when I'm feeling down.... ^^,

"

Sitting there at the back of classroom

Reminiscing the past, feeling doomed

Suddenly he settled beside me

And I mentally counted one, two, three.

 

He strums the guitar strings

And started to sing

The guitar’s sound, in perfect harmony

With his voice that fills the air so softly

 

He sings a song that inspires

Like the angels singing with their harps and lyres.

To me, his music is fascinating

It’s so hard to breathe with my heart's furious thumping.

 

He lightens up my heart

By singing and playing his guitar.

With his unique music

I’m already captivated by its magic.

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
I dedicate this poem to my special friend..........Just ignore the grammar problems......

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The flow is smoothly melodious and has served to soothe the savage storms in my psyche. For that I must thank you! See? His music echoes across eternity as all sound sculptures of truth and beauty must!

I noticed that the beginning letters to each verse were large and viewed on their own, spell Shhh. Was that an intentional acknowledgment to how your tumultuous mindset was quieted by him and his music?

All around, a gorgeous bit of literary art!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA DO YOU REMEMBER DO YOU REMEMBER DO YOU REMEMBER THROWBACK PLS

Posted 6 Years Ago


Desmund Tiny

6 Years Ago

:)))) throwback??
who's that special friend? great write :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awesome, as usual! I like the expressions in this one, they just make the flow slide along greatly. This is real art!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awesome write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A wonderful Dedication! Excellent write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


nice...

Posted 10 Years Ago


lovely poem..

Posted 10 Years Ago


very well written, and the sincerity shines through. A wonderful tribute for your friend...

Posted 10 Years Ago


good poem but i like rhyming poems more but dun care, this is pretty cool. i also love guitar. you can improve if you will try. >:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Poetic, simple and hearfelt.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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