A piece of Bliss

A piece of Bliss

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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Party's great ecstasy, escape from the cruel reality

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The rhythms make me sway
Minds and hearts are blown away

Can't escape from its magic

with each beat that's so fantastic

 

With the colourful flickering lights

dancing in the darkness of the night

Turn this place upside down

Everybody's awake in this town

 

Boys with their beers, girls on their high heels
lets party until we fall on our knees
Let you heart be on fire
It's our freedom, our desire

 

On the floor, we're moving on
with this music we're grooving on
This party's great ecstasy
Escape from cruel reality





Little piece of bliss

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


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Desmund Tiny
Please ignore the grammar problems * as always*.............

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nice

Posted 9 Years Ago


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*party rock is in the house tonight!* ^_^
great rhymes.. i imagine dancing and partying til my body drops. haha!! :)
cool poem!
*A.A.*

Posted 9 Years Ago


I could use just such a celebration about now! Seriously, great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


The imagery in this write is amazing and I love party poems so this is my favorite piece I've read today. Every line is exciting and an absolute pleasure to read. Awesome work...xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


Party on dude!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is wonderful, enjoyed the rhythm. So very nice....xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


Party, yeah! :)))

Posted 10 Years Ago


So rythmical, has a beat that is super, like an anthem :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


The rhythms make me sway
Minds and hearts are blown away
Can't escape from its magic
with each beat that's so fantastic

With the colourful flickering lights
dancing in the darkness of the night
Turn this place upside down
Everybody's awake in this town

Boys with their beers, girls on their high heels
lets party until we fall on our knees
Let you heart be on fire
It's our freedom, our desire

On the floor, we're moving on
with this music we're grooving on
This party's great ecstasy
Escape from cruel reality

Little piece of bliss
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Sorry. I couldn't read the poem, so I just copied it here. It was epic. The rhyming, the words, the scene you pictured. Really well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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