Rides

Rides

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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Thought it wasn’t scary, Anchors away

And as we tried it, it blew us away

Sways so high in the sky
with excitement, we scream, we cry

 

 

































Merry merry go around

Up in you horses, swing up and down
shimmering in lights with its cheerful sound
and we want it for another round


























Go up and down, others faint
let’s scream so loud in this crazy ride
all the fears soon to be drained
spent a time with friends in this freaky joy ride

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
It's not good .... sorry for the grammar problems

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Beautiful to see and read such rollercoaster poems, and even in the Netherlands.... touching.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hahaha! I hate Anchor's Away!!! Grrr! That scared the hell out of me! >,<
Nakakatakot talaga yung Space Shuttle, emp!
Love this...Memories... *sighs* Hurtful and happy memories... :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Desmund Tiny
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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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