Be Gutsy

Be Gutsy

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
"

Need a lot of confidence to tell her

"

I don’t want to hesitate

Before everything is too late

I want her to hear this confession
these feelings are not made up by imagination

 

Being with her is my fantasy
I wonder when would it be reality
This daydreaming must be over
I must tell my feelings for her

 

It depends on her answer

Whether we’re forever or never

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
sometimes confessing your love to someone is very hard... kyahahahahahah... ^^,

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I understand how difficult it is for one to express their feelings for another...it is tough, but it only takes time and quite a bit of courage. By telling her how you feel, whether you lose her or not because of it, you become a stronger person and you leave with pride. Knowing you did the right thing...

Posted 9 Years Ago


I understand COMPLETELY. I'm in that "I like you and want to tell you but can't get up the courage to do so" mindset myself, and this poem expresses it perfectly. Good job. :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


It is really difficult to confess something that you've kept for a special reason. I can somewhat relate to this poem. An excellent masterpiece. Keep it up.

...Layla...

Posted 9 Years Ago


nice poem...
great work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Desmund Tiny
Desmund Tiny

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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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